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"Don't cry. I'm here for you..."(Read comment)

September 30th, 2014, 5:57 pm

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Reply Blue Kirby the l33t, September 30th, 2014, 6:23 pm

Happy belated birthdays, Melody and Ryjora! "*sniff...*"
It was Spark's birthday, and she didn't eat cake. She didn't open presents. She didn't even leave her room.
All she did was cry.
Her boyfriend Ryan had been murdered earlier in the year by a Changeling named Lucid, and she could only focus on the fact that he couldn't celebrate with her. She had locked the door, but kept the window open.
"Hey."
Spark looked up and saw BK, floating with icy wings.
"Are you gonna go to the party downstairs?"
"...no...I'd like to stay here..."
He sighed and drifted in, his wings retracting back into his flesh.
"...I understand what you're going through. Ryan SHOULD be here."
She stared at him. "...have you lost someone you loved? Someone that you can remember always being there for you?"
"No."
"You have NO idea what I'm going through."
She buried her face in her blankets and cried.
"...here."
"H-huh?"
BK offered his stub and flew them outside, away from the worried voices outside the door.
"I brought you a present. I couldn't wrap it, though."
He held out a bizarre gem, glowing internally with a blue light.
"W-what is it?"
"A machine based off an item from The Legend of Zelda. Nayru's Love."
"...what does it do?"
"It makes a shield around you. That way, if you really want to be alone with your thoughts, protect yourself or someone, or just see the blue color surrounding you, you tap the ground with it."
She made a tearful smile and said "Thank you."
"Not a problem. Ryan would've wanted you to have it as a symbol of how much he loved you."
"H-how do you know?"
"If you take 'Nayru', take away the 'u', and flip it backwards, you get 'Ryan's Love'."
She glanced up from the diamond.
"That doesn't work too well. How would you know to remove the 'u'?
"You don't remove it. You take it away and put it in yourself. Remember that."
She smiled more.
"Now wipe those tears out of your eyes. You're late to your party. Ryan also would want you to go."
She wiped her eyes, nodded, and ran inside.
BK looked backwards at the red and black mist. A glimmer was in one of the lower 2 streaks of darkness.
"Thanks for letting me give that to her."
"Thanks for asking me."
"...happy late birthday, Ryan."
The wisp bobbed gently and disappeared.


So yeah. Happy late birthday to Mels and happy later birthday to Ryjora. I think this is an okay drawing and story, don't you?

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User's Comments:

Reply Ryjora, September 30th, 2014, 7:02 pm

It was going great until you referenced Zelda :/

Be original!!!

Reply Blue Kirby the l33t, September 30th, 2014, 7:14 pm

@Ryjora: I honestly can't tell if you're joking due to all dem exclamation points.

Reply Divide, October 1st, 2014, 1:53 pm

Critique Time~ Anywho, BK, this is what I call painted shite. Proportions are utterly messed up, lack of shading always ruins things, what the flip is up with that hair? There's just so many negatives about this, but at least you can draw circular shapes, which is the ONLY thing you've got going for you. Happy drawing!

Reply Blue Kirby the l33t, October 1st, 2014, 1:58 pm

@Divide: I would do shading, but one of SpSt's rules is "no shading in the Void."

Reply Ryjora, October 2nd, 2014, 5:00 am

@Blue Kirby the l33t: That wasn't a joke. I was trying to be exclamatory. I will usually use much more

Ex: !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Also about the whole "No shading" thing
http://sparkstory.smackjeeves.com/comics/1972806/16-hanna/
The only reason why there's no shading in Melody and Brokor's comics is because they're probably lazy.

(Brokor also shades once in his life in this http://i.imgur.com/ORXqzdW.png )

Reply Blue Kirby the l33t, April 27th, 2015, 10:54 pm

@Ryjora: In case you somehow see this, I edited the Zelda part. Never learned how good the story was as a whole, btw.

Reply SmashWaffle, January 24th, 2016, 7:45 pm

Ow the edge

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